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2016-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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At that time, Suddenly the sand destroyed down. So I fell down in to the water. the friend was swimming by my side. So I caught him and I climbed up to the rock. When I was under the river, I thought that I would die. Sometimes I think that I am under the river now. It was dark and I only could listen to the water's sound. 1. If you speak for a long time, you go on. a. get on b. go on c. edge on 2. To say something while another person is talking is to butt in. a. butt in b. figure out c. go over 3. To say something suddenly and without thinking is to blurt out. a. ease up b. rub in c. blurt out 4. To make someone stop talking is to shut up. a. shut up b. shut out c. shut in 5. Another way to say this is ramble on. a. tread on b. unwind c. ramble on went down carry on brought up keep off broke down 1. We cannot play football here. The sign says, "broke down the grass." 2. She brought up and cried. 3. The boy was carry on by a nanny. 4. The Titanic collided with an iceberg and went down. 5. Why don't you keep off singing? You have such a beautiful voice.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for your composition today! You did well in answering your homework. Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ At that time, Suddenly the sand destroyed down. >> At that time, suddenly the soil eroded.  So I fell down into the water. >> Correct the friend was swimming by my side. >> My friend swam by my side.  So I caught him and I climbed up to the rock. >> Correct When I was under the river, I thought that I would die. >> Correct Sometimes I think that I am under the river now. >> Correct It was dark and I only could listen to the water\'s sound.>> It was dark and I could only hear the sound of the water.  1. If you speak for a long time, you go on.a. get onb. go onc. edge on>> Correct 2. To say something while another person is talking is to butt in.a. butt inb. figure outc. go over>> Correct 3. To say something suddenly and without thinking is to blurt out.a. ease upb. rub inc. blurt out>> Correct 4. To make someone stop talking is to shut up.a. shut upb. shut outc. shut in>> Correct 5. Another way to say this is ramble on.a. tread onb. unwindc. ramble on went down carry on brought up keep off broke down>> Correct 1. We cannot play football here. The sign says, \"broke down the grass.\">> We cannot play football here. The sign says, \"Keep off the grass.\" 2. She brought up and cried.>> She broke down and cried. 3. The boy was carry on by a nanny.>> The boy was brought up by a nanny. 4. The Titanic collided with an iceberg and went down.>> Correct 5. Why don\'t you keep off singing? You have such a beautiful voice. >> Why don\'t you carry on singing? You have such a beautiful voice.

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