hi~
학생이 쓴 원문
hi abby~
umm.,
i think my voice is so soft cuz i have a sinus cold.
i sorry that my cold to the get over until.
i hope you understand.
I've had a runny nose all day. ㅠ.ㅠ
so much wipe one's nose however it's all red and sore.
however It's harder to stay focused all class time.
i hope my cold get over.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I understand your situation. There’s no problem with that. Just have more water intake so you could get well right away. I know that it’s too difficult to concentrate learning when you’re not feeling well. I guess you need to have more rest too. Moreover, do well on practicing English and I know that you get better in time. Have a great day and take care! See you tomorrow! ^_^
T. Abby “_)
Here are my corrections for you:
hi abby~
>> Hi Abby!i think my voice is so soft cuz i have a sinus cold.
>> I think my voice was so soft this day because I have a sinusitis.i sorry that my cold to the get over until.
>> I’m sorry for having a cold, just be patient with me until I get well.i hope you understand.
>> CORRECT. (Just don’t forget to capitalize the first letter of the first word in your sentence.)
I've had a runny nose all day. ㅠ.ㅠ
>> I’m having a runny nose all day.so much wipe one's nose however it's all red and sore.
>> I want to wipe my nose all the time but it’s very red already.however It's harder to stay focused all class time.
>> Moreover, it’s hard to stay focused in my class.i hope my cold get over.
>> I hope to get over of my cold.
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