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Hi there good afternoon!
Happy Monday! Thank you so much for doing great!
Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
So she could not say all of things about her worries.
>>So she was not able to tell her concerns.
Whenever 천지 went to the library, 천지 said her troubles and 오대오 just listened her story.
>>Whenever 천지 goes to the library 천지 tells her troubles and 오대오 just listened to her.
And 천지 felt better thanks to 오대오.
>>correct
This book starts with the sentence,\' 천지 is dead\' 만지 tried to figure out the reason that 천지 and knew a shocking story.
>>correct
만지 thought 화연 is 천지`s best friend but 화연 didn`t think 천지 as a friend.
>>만지 thought 화연 is 천지`s best friend but 화연 never thought 천지 her friend.
화연 incorrectly informed her birthday party time or said she wanted to get a expensive MP3.
>>화연 incorrectly informed her the time of her birthday party or said she wanted to get an expensive MP3.
And 만지 thought why 천지 didn\'t tell her story to her.
>>And 만지 thought why 천지 didn\'t tell her the story.
Actually, 천지 said her worry to 만지 in many times.
>>Actually, 천지 shared her worries/concerns to 만지 many times.
But 만지 didn`t bother it beacuase 만지 thought 천지`s situation was not serious.
>>correct
So 만지 regretted bitterly.
>>correct
In the end of story, 만지 found a note which 천지 wrote.
>>correct
The content was to say sorry.
>>correct
And also mom and two other friends found the note.
>>correct
But notes that 천지 wrote were 5.
>>correct
Then, can you guess who is the last note`s owner.
>>correct
If you want to know, please read \'Elegant Lie\'.
>>If you want to know, please read the Elegant Lie.
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