hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
maybe, do you ahve a good time with your friend now?
as i told you, i'm writing my report.
hey!
do you like popera? or classic??
these day, i am listening those things.
it make my mind soft.
and i can control myself.
but, it's little sleepy :)
always thanks for your help.
"sanctus"
do you know this song?
if you don't know this song's name,
you have listened this song somewhere!
have a nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hi^^
Thanks for dropping by your composition. I commend you for writing about what's on your mind today. Great job! Here are some of the corrections I've made:
maybe, do you ahve a good time with your friend now?
>>I guess you're having a good time with your friend now, am I right ?as i told you, i'm writing my report.
>>As I've told you, I'm writing a report.hey!do you like popera? or classic??
>>Hey, which one do you like better, popera or classic?these day, i am listening those things.
>> I am listening to those things these days.it make my mind soft.
>>It makes me have a peace of mind.and i can control myself.
>>And it makes me control my mind.but, it's little sleepy :)
>>But it makes me feel a little sleepy.always thanks for your help.
>>I'm always grateful for your help."sanctus" do you know this song?>>Do you know the song "Sanctus"?if you don't know this song's name, you have listened this song somewhere!
>>You might not know this song's title, but perhaps you have heard this song somewhere already!have a nice weekend!
>>CORRECT!
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