hi!

2011-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

maybe, do you ahve a good time with your friend now? as i told you, i'm writing my report. hey! do you like popera? or classic?? these day, i am listening those things. it make my mind soft. and i can control myself. but, it's little sleepy :) always thanks for your help. "sanctus" do you know this song? if you don't know this song's name, you have listened this song somewhere! have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hi^^ Thanks for dropping by your composition. I commend you for writing about what's on your mind today. Great job! Here are some of the corrections I've made: maybe, do you ahve a good time with your friend now? >>I guess you're having a good time with your friend now, am I right ?as i told you, i'm writing my report. >>As I've told you, I'm writing a report.hey!do you like popera? or classic?? >>Hey, which one do you like better, popera or classic?these day, i am listening those things. >> I am listening to those things these days.it make my mind soft. >>It makes me have a peace of mind.and i can control myself. >>And it makes me control my mind.but, it's little sleepy :) >>But it makes me feel a little sleepy.always thanks for your help. >>I'm always grateful for your help."sanctus" do you know this song?>>Do you know the song "Sanctus"?if you don't know this song's name, you have listened this song somewhere! >>You might not know this song's title, but perhaps you have heard this song somewhere already!have a nice weekend! >>CORRECT!

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