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2010-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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HI Lie- oh - I am really sorry about today class I stayed up all night with my some frineds. that's why i was not well ㅠ.. I should have been sleep well. when i said in english in the subway all the people looked at me strangly. :) you know- korea sbuway always crowd and nosie. i was too.! so I coun't concentrat on our class fully - ㅠ.. and i coun't understand fully what you said- i knew - you always tried to understand me during class time- i am really sorry about that- i think i was going to crazy then. :) i'll be answer the your phone tomorrow in my room :) when got home l turnd on the computer to find your comments and adio file- ㅋㅋ ok- anyway today korea weather is crazy - all the korea was attacked snow- so i'll be stay in my house- :) take care lei-~ see you

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim!! Yeah, I heard that it suddenly snowed in some parts of Korea. Don't forget to bring a jacket and an umbrella everywhere you go. The weather nowadays is getting weird, maybe because of global warming. Anyways, take care. I'll see you tomorrow. By the way it's Lei not Lie J   HI Lie- >>correctoh - I am really sorry about today class >>I am really sorry about today's classI stayed up all night with my some frineds. >>I satyed up all night with some of my friendsthat's why i was not well ㅠ.. >>that's why I didn't do well I should have been sleep well. >>I should have slept wellwhen i said in english in the subway all the people looked at me strangly. :) >>When I speak in English in the subway all the people looked at me in a strange wayyou know- korea sbuway always crowd and nosie. i was too.! >>you know, subways here in Korea are always crowded and noisyso I coun't concentrat on our class fully - ㅠ.. >>so I can't concentrate  with our classand i coun't understand fully what you said- >>and I can't fully understand what you were sayingi knew - you always tried to understand me during class time- >> i know - you always tried to understand me during class time-i am really sorry about that- >>correcti think i was going to crazy then. :) >>I think I was going crazy then Ji'll be answer the your phone tomorrow in my room :) >>I'll answer your call tomorrow in my roomwhen got home l turnd on the computer to find your comments and adio file- ㅋㅋ >>When I got home I turned on the computer to look at your comment and audio fileok- anyway today korea weather is crazy ?lt;o:p> >>anyway, today's weather is weirdall the korea was attacked snow- >>It suddenly snowed heavily. so i'll be stay in my house- >>So I'll stay home:) take care lei-~ see you >>correct

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