Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Marie!
Did you have a nice day?
I catch a cold.
So I make a kimch'stew.
I eat a many it. I like a it.
Because When I sick, I neet to eat a lot of food.
So I go to bed early.
See you tomorrow!
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for dropping by. I hope you will get better soon !!
See you.
Hi,Marie!
Did you have a nice day?
>> Correct
I catch a cold.
>> I caught a cold.
So I make a kimch'stew.
>> SO I made kimchi stew.
I eat a many it. I like a it.
>> I ate much of it, I like it.
Because When I sick, I neet to eat a lot of food.
>> When I'm sick, I need to eat a lot of food.
So I go to bed early.
>> So, I will go to bed early.
See you tomorrow!
>> Correct
Bye.
>> Bye, too.
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