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2011-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hi,Marie! Did you have a nice day? I catch a cold. So I make a kimch'stew. I eat a many it. I like a it. Because When I sick, I neet to eat a lot of food. So I go to bed early. See you tomorrow! Bye.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for dropping by. I hope you will get better soon !!

See you.

Hi,Marie!
Did you have a nice day?

>> Correct
I catch a cold.

>> I caught a cold.
So I make a kimch'stew.

>> SO I made kimchi stew.
I eat a many it. I like a it.

>> I ate much of it, I like it.
Because When I sick, I neet to eat a lot of food.

>> When I'm sick, I need to eat a lot of food.
So I go to bed early.

>> So, I will go to bed early.
See you tomorrow!

>> Correct
Bye.

>> Bye, too.

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