hi!

2011-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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thank you for calling me everyday. because or your call, i can get up early everyday. but next week, i will put off my classes for my final exam. studying major, i used to do that until late time without my mind. i like to go to bed early and wake up ealry. but these days, the whether is hot and i' exhausted . so it is hard for me to get up early. have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for the message! ^^ I'm glad  that I help you wake up early, I don't mind being your alarm clock! :-) Anyway, please call my manager if you want to put your classes on hold, so they can arrange our schedule. Good luck with your final exam! I know you'll pass! ^^ I'll miss you! See you when I see you! *_* - Teacher Joey By the way, here are my corrections: thank you for calling me everyday. >>> Correct.  because or your call, i can get up early everyday.>>> Because of your call, I get up early everyday. but next week, i will put off my classes for my final exam. >>> But next week, I will call off /postpone my classes in preparation of my final exam.studying major, i used to do that until late time without my mind. >>>I used to do that if I'm studying my major because I want to focus.i like to go to bed early and wake up ealry. >>> I like to go to bed early and wake up early.but these days, the whether is hot and i' exhausted .>>> But recently, the weather is hot and I feel exhausted. so it is hard for me to get up early. >>> That's why it's hard for me to wake up early.have a nice weekend! >>> Correct. *** Please try to make your sentences complete. ^^ Thanks

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