hi!

2011-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 May

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how was your day today? my test was overed in friday. so i had a great weekend with gossip girl. actually,i had some plans for my free time. ex) watching documentory movies or reading a book about lslam. but, i could find that i don't want that after exam. i just want to watch the tv or eat some instant food. so i did. tomorrow, you can find someone who try to speak English better than anyone. good night pretty, always thank you:)

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

 

My day is just starting so I can't say much, but so far it is good, Thank you for asking.

How about you?

Watching documentary movies or films, or reading books can be fun, specially since I enjoy doing those too! ^^ But I hope they are in English, so you can improve your vocabulary and listening skills ^^

 I'm happy that you enjoy watching American series like, Gossip Girl.

Try to imitate the actors as they speak- their actions, pronunciations, accent, expressions, etc. for you to improve your English skills.

Thank you too!

Have a great Monday!

T. Joey

 

Here are my corrections!

how was your day today?

>>>Correct
my test was overed in friday.

>>> My test was over last Friday.
so i had a great weekend with gossip girl.
>>> that's why I had a great weekend watching Gossip Girl.

actually,i had some plans for my free time.

>>> Correct!
ex) watching documentory movies or reading a book about lslam.
>>> like watching documentary films or reading books about Islam.

but, i could find that i don't want that after exam.

>>> But I don't want to do it after my exams.
i just want to watch the tv or eat some instant food.

>>>Correct!
so i did.
>>> Correct!

>>> Or, and that's what I did.
tomorrow, you can find someone who try to speak English better than anyone.

>>>Tomorrow, you can meet someone who speaks English better than anyone.
good night pretty, always thank you:)

>>> Good night Pretty, Thank you :)

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