Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
This is [이름]!
Good morning teacher!
As i told you I'm the only one who come to the office at 8am.
usually I'm busy, but today it is really peaseful here.
so I'm kind of enjoy my free time :)
I really want to speak english very fluently.
but the most difficult part for me is formal english.
like you know I'm working for foreign investment company here in korea.
many of my collegues speak english at work.
unfortunately i dont use that much.
Because my superior who is in a manager level she can speak good english.
so most of the job which we have to contact with the oversea colleagues she does.
so there is nothing i can do actually.
but kind of luckily she may move to another company.
Which means she will leave this company.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for making a composition.Because of that,I knew that your situation at work.Do not worry,I will help you out.You just need to study hard.You can do it.
-T.Ritchel-
This is [이름]!
>>Correct
Good morning teacher!
>>Correct
As i told you I'm the only one who come to the office at 8am.
>> As I told you, I'm the only one who comes to the office at 8 a.m.
usually I'm busy, but today it is really peaseful here.
>> Usually I'm busy, but today it is really peaceful here.
>>I am usually busy but it is really peaceful here today.
so I'm kind of enjoy my free time :)
>>So, I kind of enjoy my free time.
I really want to speak english very fluently.
>> I really want to speak English very fluently.
but the most difficult part for me is formal english.
>> But the most difficult part for me is formal English.
like you know I'm working for foreign investment company here in korea.
>> Like you know, I'm working for a foreign investment company here in Korea.
many of my collegues speak english at work.
>> Many of my colleagues speak English at work.
unfortunately i dont use that much.
>> Unfortunately I don't use English that much.
Because my superior who is in a manager level she can speak good english.
>> Because my superior who is in a manager level can speak good English.
so most of the job which we have to contact with the oversea colleagues she does.
>>So she does most of the job on which we have to contact our colleagues overseas.
so there is nothing i can do actually.
>>So actually, there is nothing I can do much.
but kind of luckily she may move to another company.
>> But kind of luckily, she may move to another company.
Which means she will leave this company.
>>This means she will leave this company.
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