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강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! It's nice to hear from you again! I miss your compositions! Thank you for always making a point to write even though you're quite busy. :) We also experienced a typhoon here in the Philippines so it has been raining nonstop for a few days now. I like it though, coz it's very foggy and cold. I guess I'll just stay home and marathon some movie or TV dramas this weekend. I hope you'll enjoy your quality bonding time with your daughters. Drink hot choco or milk with them and read lots of books with them. Good luck and enjoy the rainy weekend! CIAO!
=T.Marie=
Hi,Marie!
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What do you weekend plan?
>> What are your weekend plans?
The typhoom will be moving north in Korea during weekend.
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So Maybe, I will stay at home with my daughters.
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**Do not capitalize the word 'maybe'.
We will read a book.
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I will teach letter to my daughters.
>> I will teach the alphabet to my daughters.
See you later.
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Bye.
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