Hi
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강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^_^
Happy New Year too! May you have a prosperous 2017.
Thank you for this composition.
Be mindful of the principles or rules when writing sentences such as punctuation, spacing, capitalization, and so on.
See you on Tuesday next year! (^_^)
_T. Mayleen :)
Hi Mayleen,
>> Hi, Mayleen!
OR: Hi Mayleen!
USE PROPER PUNCTUATION MARKS FOR GREETING. :)
Thank u for noticing me about a word \'ambience\'.
Now I remember that word :D
>> Thank you for informing or reminding me about the word \'ambience\'.
I remember it now.
By the way, I looked through our textbook and find out that it has many questions from opic test.
>> Correct!
So I think that it would be good to have mock test for opic ,using that questions duuring our class
>> So I think (that) it would be good to have a mock test for OPIc using those questions during our class.
RECHECK YOUR SENTENCE FOR REPEATED LETTER AND PROPER SPACING.
Thx u for having class with me
See you next year!
& Happy New year
>> Thanks for having the class with me. See you next year! Happy New Year!
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