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2011-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I read your feedback. I am sad. Sometimes we have so many miss understend. During the last calling, we speak the trip and my first love. But I have not any other travel plan. I will not go to Chana. I can't understend what you say on feedback. uuuu... and my first love lives in other city, so we can't meet so often. we just contect in on-line. I mean that we have long distance. Not the time, we meet, is short. .... To use sell-phone speak English is too difficult to do comunication. Whenever I want to some speak, I feel a difficult. hu...... I can't look forward to up-grade of English skill. .... Um... how can I do for my English. I have to study something like speaking, writting, reading, listening and words... Please help me that I can study English easy.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections provided below. Don't worry, I will help you learn English the easy and fun way. Take care! T. Faye   I read your feedback. I am sad. >> Correct.Sometimes we have so many miss understend. >> Sometimes we have so many misunderstanding.During the last calling, we speak the trip and my first love. >> During the last class, we talked about my trip and my first love.But I have not any other travel plan. I will not go to Chana. >> I don't have other plans. I will not go to China. I can't understend what you say on feedback. uuuu... >> I can't understand what you wrote on the feedback.and my first love lives in other city, so we can't meet so often. we just contect in on-line. >> My first love lives in another city, so we can't meet so often. We just contact each other online. I mean that we have long distance. Not the time, we meet, is short. >> I mean that we have a long distance relationship, I don't mean that we just met for a short time..... To use sell-phone speak English is too difficult to do comunication. >> Using a cellphone to study and speak English is difficult. Whenever I want to some speak, I feel a difficult. hu...... >> Whenever I want to say something, I feel that it's difficult to do so. I can't look forward to up-grade of English skill. >> I can't wait to improve my English skill..... Um... how can I do for my English. >> What can I do to improve my English skill?I have to study something like speaking, writting, reading, listening and words... >> I have to practice speaking, writing, reading, listening, and learning new vocabularies.Please help me that I can study English easy. >> Please help me study English the easy way.

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