Hi
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How did you hear about the position?
I came across an online advertisement regarding this job a few months ago.
But, I missed the chance to apply.
I read an online advertisement again.
I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter.
It was an opportunity that I couldn't just pass up.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Happy Tuesday! (^_____^)//
Thank you so much for this composition.
I\'ve read it well. It was good and you were able to able yourself in a very good way.
I will talk to you again tomorrow. See you then!
_T. Mayleen :)
I came across an online advertisement regarding this job a few months ago.
>> I came across an online advertisement regarding this job position a few months ago.
OR: I came across an online advertisement regarding this job offer a few months ago.
But, I missed the chance to apply.
>> Correct!
OR: However, I missed the opportunity to apply.
I read an online advertisement again.
>> I read it on an online advertisement again.
OR: I saw it on an online advertisement again.
I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter.
>> Correct!
It was an opportunity that I couldn\'t just pass up.
>> Correct!
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