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2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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How did you hear about the position? I came across an online advertisement regarding this job a few months ago. But, I missed the chance to apply. I read an online advertisement again. I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter. It was an opportunity that I couldn't just pass up.

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Good evening, [이름]!^^ Happy Tuesday! (^_____^)//   Thank you so much for this composition. I\'ve read it well. It was good and you were able to able yourself in a very good way. I will talk to you again tomorrow. See you then!   _T. Mayleen :)   I came across an online advertisement regarding this job a few months ago. >> I came across an online advertisement regarding this job position a few months ago. OR: I came across an online advertisement regarding this job offer a few months ago. But, I missed the chance to apply. >> Correct! OR: However, I missed the opportunity to apply. I read an online advertisement again. >> I read it on an online advertisement again. OR: I saw it on an online advertisement again. I immediately submitted my resume and cover letter. >> Correct! It was an opportunity that I couldn\'t just pass up. >> Correct!

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