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2017-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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What is your major and why did you choose that major ? My major is chemical engineering. When I was high school student my homeroom teacher taught us chemistry. I've got passionate about chemistry. I was very excited about that any materials are related to chemistry. So I took it up in DongA university. I am currently working in thread-dyeing company. In here, I was able to got knowledge about chemistry of dyeing.

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Good afternoon. [이름]!^^ Happy Monday! (^_^)   Thank you so much for this composition. Your sentences are good. However, there were unnecessary words included. Also, do not forget your articles and prepositions. See you late in class! Enjoy the rest of the day. :)   _T. Mayleen (^-^)   My major is chemical engineering. >> Correct! When I was high school student my homeroom teacher taught us chemistry. >> When I was a high school student, my homeroom teacher taught us chemistry. I\'ve got passionate about chemistry. >> I\'ve got passion for chemistry. OR: I\'ve become passionate about chemistry. I was very excited about that any materials are related to chemistry. >> I was very excited with any activities related to chemistry. So I took it up in DongA university. >> I am a graduate of DongA University. I am currently working in thread-dyeing company. >> I am currently working in a thread-dyeing company. In here, I was able to got knowledge about chemistry of dyeing. >> There I was able to gain knowlegde about the chemicals used in dyeing.

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