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Topic5. Why do you want to work for us? (What can you bring to our company?) I'm continuously interested in chemical filed. Unfortunately, I don't have chance to work that filed. My major is chemical engineering and I have certification about Hazardous materials So, I think I can easily learn about your job. And, I have experience in marketing field. I'm currently working in thread-dyeing company in marketing department. One of my important tasks is managing my customer Managing is inclued answering calls, checking e-mails, keeping and updating important documents such as contracts, invoices. I khow that my skills can help your company grow.

Good afternoon, [이름]!^^   Thank you so much for this composition. Your sentences are good. However, you have to be careful with your spelling. There were unnecessary words. Simplify your sentences, but make sure that the thought is clear and complete. See you tomorrow in our next class! :)   _T. Mayleen (^-^)   I\'m continuously interested in chemical filed. >> My interest is in the chemical field. Unfortunately, I don\'t have chance to work that filed. >> Unfortunately, I didn\'t have the chance to work on that filed. My major is chemical engineering and I have certification about Hazardous materials >> My major is Chemical Engineering and I have a certification on handling hazardous materials. So, I think I can easily learn about your job. >> I think I can easily learn the job. And, I have experience in marketing field. >> Also, I have experience in the marketing field. I\'m currently working in thread-dyeing company in marketing department. >> I\'m currently working in marketing department of a thread-dyeing company. One of my important tasks is managing my customer >> One of my tasks is dealing with clients or customers. Managing is inclued answering calls, checking e-mails, keeping and updating important documents such as contracts, invoices.>> It includes communication through phone call and email, keeping updating important documents such as contracts and invoices.   I khow that my skills can help your company grow. >> I know that my skill can help your company grow.