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2011-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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These days Korea and Japan relationship is very serious. Korea and Japan are being close even we have have had a bad situation in history. However still now we have a huge strife. That is about Dokdo. Yesterday, three Member of Parliament came to Korea. They wanted to visit Ulleung Island. Ulleung Island is located near Dokdo. We don't know exactly why they want to visit Ulleung Island. So, Korean goverment warn. However, they was passed over warning and came to Korea. A lot of civic groups and far-right organizations protested that Japan is wrong and they made mistake in between Korean and Japan in everywhere. Finally, Member of Parliament went back just from Gimpo airport where is near Seoul. Thease days, Korean people are angry and feel betrayed to Japan.

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Wow, good composition.... You did a good job, keep it up Teacher Verna These days Korea and Japan relationship is very serious. >> These days Korea and Japan's relationship is very serious.Korea and Japan are being close even we have have had a bad situation in history. >>  CORRECT!However still now we have a huge strife. >> However, until now we still have a huge strife.That is about Dokdo.>> CORRECT! Yesterday, three Member of Parliament came to Korea.>> Yesterday, three members from the parliament came to Korea. They wanted to visit Ulleung Island. >> CORRECT! Ulleung Island is located near Dokdo. >> CORRECT! We don't know exactly why they want to visit Ulleung Island.>> We don't exactly know why they want to visit Ulleung Island. So, Korean goverment warn.>> So, Korean government was warned. However, they was passed over warning and came to Korea.>> However, they were passed over the warning and it came to Korea. A lot of civic groups and far-right organizations protested that Japan is wrong and they made mistake in between Korean and Japan in everywhere.>> A lot of civic groups and far-right oraganizations protested that Japan was wrong, and they made a mistake between Korea and Japan everywhere. Finally, Member of Parliament went back just from Gimpo airport where is near Seoul.>> Finally, the members of the parliament went back from Gimpo Airport near Seoul.Thease days, Korean people are angry and feel betrayed to Japan. >> These days, Korean people are angry and they feel betrayed by Japanese.

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