HI

  Hi [이름]! ^^

It is my pleasure to be your partner in this journey of learning

English. Thank you for sharing something about you.

I look forward to know more about you as we go on with

our classes. :)

Please review on my corrections below.

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

I have 4 people in my family. Father,mother,older sister and me.

>>> I have four people in my family, my father, my mother, my older sister and me.

or

>>> We are all four in my family, my father, my mother, my older sister and me.

My older sister got married. so She has son and daughter.

>> My older sister is married and she has a son and a daughter.

And I don\'t have boyfriend. And I\'m very tall.

>> I don\'t have a boyfriend and I\'m very tall.

Men feel burdened by my tall height. So I want to meet a man who likes my tall height. I wish my boyfriend were similar to mine.

>> Correct

or

>>> Men feel burdened with my tall height, so I want to meet a man who likes my height.  I wish my future boyfriend will be like me.

 And I will go to New Zealand. I want to live in cool air. Korea is dangerous and desolate.

>> I will go to New Zealand. I want to live in a place with cool air because Korea is dangerous and desolated.

Korea high school student should study until 10 p.m. I don\'t want to grow my child these circumstances.

>> In Korea, high school students should study until 10 PM. I don\'t want my child to be in this kind of circumstances.

AND my mom said to me \"Mom and dad will go to heaven before you and family is the most precious thing. And you have just one sister. She lives in NZD. so If you meet good man in NZD, I thought you\'d better live in there, like your sister.\"

>> My mom once told me, \" Mom and dad will go to heaven before you and family is the most important thing. You only have one sister who is in NZD. If you meet a good man in NZD, you\'d better live there like your sister.

So I have to speak English very well.

>> Correct

Also I wanted to speak English fluently since I was in middle school student.And It was my dream to go to NZD.

>> Correct [Just be careful with your punctuation marks. :)]

>> Also, I wanted to speak English fluently since I was in middle school student and it was my dream to go to NZD.

I prayed to GOD to let me go to NZD. My dream came true. My siter\'s family have permanent citizenship and citizenship

>> I prayed to God to let me go to NZD and my dream came true. My sister\'s family have a permanent citizenship there.