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2017-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I choose the sentence but I don't know it's right. Very few People fly just because of terrorist activities. Johnny is a keen player but unforunately he has few skills.If we don't move faster, we'll miss our transfer to Munish.There isn't any time to waste. Unfortunately, I haven't got few time for watching TV. You can buy these maps at a lot of station. They all have them. And I saw Wonder woman with my church's sister. I want to watch the movie with a man.There was a amazing in the story. But I wasn't surprised. It was quite a predictable story. But I was interesting. And caramel popcorn was delicious.I want to watch another movie. In the movie, They said to us, Women can everything. Women are never weak.And Women can everything like men.Unfortunately the love between actor and actress wastn't realized.The actor died. And the scene of fighting was vivid. It was good because there was no cruel scene. Wonder Women rode the horse was impressive and awesome.They helped people in trouble

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Hi [이름]! Great afternoon! ^^   The movie sounds really interesting. :) I might as well find time to watch it, yeah? :) Anyway, thank you for sharing and answering this exercise. Please review on my corrections, dear. :)   See you!   Teacher Glenda     Here are my corrections: I choose the sentence but I don\'t know it\'s right. >>I chose the sentences but I don\'t know if it\'s right. Very few People fly just because of terrorist activities. >> Correct Johnny is a keen player but unforunately he has few skills. >> Correct If we don\'t move faster, we\'ll miss our transfer to Munish. There isn\'t any time to waste. >> correct Unfortunately, I haven\'t got few time for watching TV. >> much You can buy these maps at a lot of station. They all have them. >> any   And I saw Wonder woman with my church\'s sister. >> I saw the movie \'Wonder Woman\' with my church sister. I want to watch the movie with a man. >> Correct or >> I want to watch a  movie with a man. There was a amazing in the story. But I wasn\'t surprised. >> There was an amazing story in the movie but I wasn\'t surprised. It was quite a predictable story. But I was interesting. >> Correct or >> It was quite a predictable story, but I was interesting. And caramel popcorn was delicious.I want to watch another movie. >> Correct or >> The caramel popcorn was delicious and I want to watch another movie. In the movie, They said to us, Women can everything. >> In the movie, they said to us, \"Women can do everything.\" Women are never weak.And Women can everything like men. >> Women are never weak and women can do everything like men. Unfortunately the love between actor and actress wastn\'t (wasn\'t) realized. >> Correct The actor died. And the scene of fighting was vivid. >> The actor died and the fighting scene was vivid. It was good because there was no cruel scene. >> Correct Wonder Women rode the horse was impressive and awesome.They helped people in trouble >> When Wonder woman rode the horse, it was impressive and awesome. They helped people who are in trouble.

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