Hi~
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I will travel to Johannesburg and CapeTown in South Africa via Hong Kong for two weeks from September 26th.
I want to speak English when I want to make an aviation ticket and seat selection, how to request service with in an aircraft, immigration, and security search. Can you help me?
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HELLO [이름],
Thank you for telling me the things that you want in our class.
I will take note of all your requests.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I will travel to Johannesburg and CapeTown in South Africa via Hong Kong for two weeks from September 26th.
>> CORRECT
I want to speak English when I want to make an aviation ticket and seat selection, how to request service with in an aircraft, immigration, and security search.
I want to speak English when I want to make an aviation ticket and seat selection, how to request service with in an aircraft, immigration, and security search.
>> I want to talk fluently when I make a reservation.
Can you help me?
>> CORRECT
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