Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Marie!
Did you have a nice weekend?
Last Friday, I played a screen golf with my co-workers.
Do you know a screen golf?
Screen golf is popular in Korea.
I have wanted to play screen golf since a long time ago.
It's a difficult but it's a interesting.
I will go a screen golf Tomorrow evening with my husband.
Enjoy the holiday to your heart's content.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Hmm... I've never heard of screen golf before. It sounds interesting. I will look it up on the Internet. Or maybe you can tell me more about it in our next class. :D Anyway, I had a great weekend! I enjoyed hanging out with my family and friends. I hope you did too. Great composition by the way! Take care and enjoy your day! CIAO!
~T.Marie~
Hi,Marie!
>>correctDid you have a nice weekend?
>>correctLast Friday, I played a screen golf with my co-workers.
>>correctDo you know a screen golf?
>>correct
>> Do you know screen golf? -betterScreen golf is popular in Korea.
>>correctI have wanted to play screen golf since a long time ago.
>> I've been wanting to play screen golf for a long time now.It's a difficult but it's a interesting.
>> It's difficult but it's interesting.I will go a screen golf Tomorrow evening with my husband.
>> I will go play screen golf tomorrow with my husband.Enjoy the holiday to your heart's content.
>>correct
**Great expression here! Wow. I'm impressed. Bye.
>>correct
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