HI~

2011-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Lara~^^ Last week I was little busy because school started. It was changed my schedule and I adapted to a new surroundings and biorhythm. But I have enough day time than summer vacation. After adating , I want to use my time effectively and diligently. I want to learn to play the ukulele and to practice yoga. And I will study Enlglish more at first!! When you call to me ,I want to speak like this and to ask this and that to you, but it is very difficult. I am wakeful now...^^ Bye~ see you afternoon~

강사 첨삭

Hi Claire!! I'm so happy that you want to do things that will help you alot. I know that you will become happy. Regarding your English learning, well just be patient with yourself. You will be an effective English speaker if you just be consistent in learning more each day. Teacher Lara will definitely help you in improving yor skill. ^^ Take care and talk to you soon then.   Hi, Lara~^^>> Hi Lara.Last week I was little busy because school started. >> Last week I was a little busy because classes has already started.It was changed my schedule and I adapted to a new surroundings and biorhythm. >> It has changed my schedule and I adapted to a new surroundings and biorhythm.But I have enough day time than summer vacation. >> But I have enough day time than in the summer vacation.After adating , I want to use my time effectively and diligently. >> After adjusting to it, I want to use my time effectively and diligently.I want to learn to play the ukulele and to practice yoga. >> CorrectAnd I will study Enlglish more at first!! >> But first, I will study English even more.When you call to me ,I want to speak like this and to ask this and that to you, but it is very difficult. >> When you call me, I want to speak and ask questions fluently, like the way you speak but it is very difficult.I am wakeful now...^^>> I am fully awake now. ^^Bye~ see you afternoon~ >> Bye ~ see you this afternoon.

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