Hi~~

2018-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello ^^ I am sorry that I won\'t be able to have the class with you tomorrow morning . I told you that there is something wrong with my TV. I\'ve called the service just now. The lady at the service center told me that the man who fixes TV is going to come over my place at 9:10. (Other times are all booked up.~~sadly ㅠㅠ) I don\'t think that the man can fix my TV in 20 minutes. You know that TV takes a lot of parts in my life^^. So.... I\'m gonna see you on Thursday morning. Sorry once again ~ and Bye ~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi there Miss [이름]!

How are you? I hope that you\'re feeling much better today.

I also hope that your TV will be fixed very soon.

See you tomorrow.

Take care!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Hello ^^
I am sorry that I won\'t be able to have the class with you tomorrow morning . I told you that there is something wrong with my TV.
I\'ve called the service just now.

>>> I\'ve called the service center just a few minutes ago.

The lady at the service center told me that the man who fixes TV is going to come over my place at 9:10.
(Other times are all booked up.~~sadly ㅠㅠ)

>>> The lady at the service center told me that the technician is going to come over my place at 9:10. Sadly, there\'s no available time aside from that.
I don\'t think that the man can fix my TV in 20 minutes.
You know that TV takes a lot of parts in my life^^. 

>>> You know that TV is a very important part of my life.
 So....
I\'m gonna see you on Thursday morning.
Sorry once again ~ and
Bye ~~~

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