Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Aileen!
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
ESSAY: Do you like meeting new people?
Yes, I really love to meet new people all around the world.
>> CORRECT
When I meet new people, I can learn new interpersonal skill.
>> CORRECT
I think I am a person who can accept all kinds of people, I believe when I understand their perspective, I would be happy for the rest of my time.
>> I think I\'m a person who can accept and mingle with all kinds of people. I believe I would be happy when I understand their perspective.
In addition, especially to being a cabin crew, we should not have prejudice to other people, it can be breed discrimination.
>> In addition, especially for cabin crews, we should not have prejudice to other people as it can breed discrimination.
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