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Hi Kelly~ Are you having a good day? Today I am slightly tired and I hava a little sore throat. Last week I got the result of TOEIC test and I was diappointed to me. Compare to a result of 2 years ago my score went down almost 150 points. So I made a plan to study of TOEIC. Oh! it's so boring to study it. However I have a wood craft class today. I will focus it and enjoy^^ Tomorrow I have to get early because of some paper work. Have a good evening and see you soon~

Hello! You did a wonderful job on your compostition. I did, however noticed a few mistakes. These are the corrections in the compostition that you've made. Please read them carefully. Good job! Hi Kelly~ >>CORRECT! Are you having a good day? >>CORRECT! Today I am slightly tired and I hava a little sore throat.>> Today I am slightly tired and I hava a bit of a sore throat. Last week I got the result of TOEIC test and I was diappointed to me.>> Last week I got the result of my TOEIC test and I was diappointed in myself. Compare to a result of 2 years ago my score went down almost 150 points.>> Compared to my score 2 years ago, my score went down for almost 150 points. So I made a plan to study of TOEIC.>> So I made a plan to study  TOEIC. Oh! it's so boring to study it.>>Oh! Studying it is so boring. However I have a wood craft class today. >>CORRECT!I will focus it and enjoy^^ >>CORRECT!Tomorrow I have to get early because of some paper work. >> Tomorrow I have to get up  early because of some paper work.Have a good evening and see you soon~ >>CORRECT!