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I think SNS(social media) has good and bad points.

>> or:  I think that using SNS has both benefits and drawbacks.

 Actually, I don\'t do SNS as I want to concentrate on my studies and I just want to focus on my real life. not just showing what my lifestyle is and concerning how other people are thinking about me.

>> Actually, I don\'t use SNS as I want to concentrate on my studies and just want to focus on my life. I don\'t want to get affected by what others think of me.

 It\'s depends on people, but I was too cared about how other peoeple thinking about my posts. When I realized it wastes of my time, I deleted SNS.
>> I used to care too much about what other people thought of my posts but when I realized that it was only a waste of my time, I deleted my SNS accounts.

 and also what I think good points of SNS are that I could find people who I miss easily by using some of information. 

>>However, one benefit of SNS is that I could check on the people whom I miss.

 Even I don\'t know what my friend\'s telephone number is, I could find them just searching their name, age, school they are graduated. 

>> Even though I don\'t know my friend\'s telephone number, I could still find them by searching for their personal information on SNS.

 Second thing is that I could know what is nowadays trends, catch them fast and communicate with other people together about that topic.

>> Another benefit is that I could update myself on the happenings around me and discuss current events with other people.