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What do you expect from living in Qatar?
How will living in Qatar suit your lifestyle?
It would not difficult to adapt. I would think \'Qatar\' is my country. There is a saying \"when in Rome, do as the Romans do\" I would follow the rules that required for me to keep.
>> It would not be difficult to adapt to the life in Qatar as I would think that it is my country. There is a saying \"when in Rome, do as the Romans do.\" I would follow the rules that are required of me to keep.
and actually, after finished the flights, cabin crew may get tired and they should take a rest well for the next flights.
>> Also, I believe that the cabin crew may be too tired after work that they would rather take a rest to prepare for the next flights.
So I would like to find and do activies that makes me recharge after a busy or tired day such as cooking, making a postcard, edit my photos and so on.
>> So I would like to find and do activities that would help me recharge after a busy or tiring day, such as cooking, making a postcard, editing my photos, and so on.
I would save my energy as much as I can and want to do all my best every flights.
>> I would save my energy as much as I can so that I could give my best at work.
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My hometown is Seoul. and I would like to recommend \'Gwan-ak\' mountain which is placed near my house. which moutain is not hight to climb and can get fresh air so many people go there and have some food with rice wine.
>> My hometown is Seoul. I would like to recommend Gwan-ak mountain which is near my house. One can easily climb the mountain as it isn\'t high and can enjoy fresh air that\'s why many people go there and have some food with rice wine.
My parents usually go there together and have their own time. I think that\'s the reason why my parents have good relationship.
>> My parents usually go to the mountain to spend time together. I think that\'s the reason why they have a good relationship.
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