Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly~
Did you have a happy Monday?
I don't like Monday and I think everybody doesn't like it.
However, when I arrived school I was good.
so I could manage my classes very easily.
Last sunday I had to write the reports of students.
It was hard work.
I just finish 40 students and 30 are more remained.
What a boring work!!
Maybe that's the reason I couldn't get up early this morning.
Tomorrow is my favorite day because I have only two classes
so every Tuesday I go to the cinema!!
I wish you also have a good Tuesday.
See you on a real happy day(it means tomorrow;-)
강사 첨삭
Hi!
You did a good job in writing this. I enjoyed reading it. I noticed some mistakes. Please check them out. Have a nice evening!
-T. Kelly
Did you have a happy Monday?
>>Correct!I don't like Monday and I think everybody does not like it.
>>Correct!However, when I arrived school I was good.
>>However, I felt good when I arrived in school.so I could manage my classes very easily.
>>So,I was able to managed all of my classes very easily.Last sunday I had to write the reports of students.
>>Last Sunday, I had to write reports of students.It was hard work.
>>It was a hard work.I just finish 40 students and 30 are more remained.
>>I just finished writing reports of 40 students and 30 more students are still remaining. What a boring work!!
>>Correct!Maybe that is the reason I couldn't get up early this morning.
>> Maybe that is the reason why I could not get up early this morning.Tomorrow is my favorite day because I have only two classes
>>Tomorrow is my favorite day because I only have two classes.
>>I only have two classes for tomorrow that is why it is my favorite day.so every Tuesday I go to the cinema!!
>>So,I go to the cinema every Tuesday!I wish you also have a good Tuesday.
>>I wish you will also have a good Tuesday.See you on a real happy day(it means tomorrow;-)
>>Tomorrow will be a real happy day. See you! ;-)
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