Hi

2011-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly~ Did you have a happy Monday? I don't like Monday and I think everybody doesn't like it. However, when I arrived school I was good. so I could manage my classes very easily. Last sunday I had to write the reports of students. It was hard work. I just finish 40 students and 30 are more remained. What a boring work!! Maybe that's the reason I couldn't get up early this morning. Tomorrow is my favorite day because I have only two classes so every Tuesday I go to the cinema!! I wish you also have a good Tuesday. See you on a real happy day(it means tomorrow;-)

강사 첨삭

Hi! You did a good job in writing this. I enjoyed reading it. I noticed some mistakes. Please check them out. Have a nice evening! -T. Kelly   Did you have a happy Monday? >>Correct!I don't like Monday and I think everybody does not like it. >>Correct!However, when I arrived school I was good. >>However, I felt good when I arrived in school.so I could manage my classes very easily. >>So,I was able to managed all of my classes very easily.Last sunday I had to write the reports of students. >>Last Sunday, I had to write reports of students.It was hard work. >>It was a hard work.I just finish 40 students and 30 are more remained. >>I just finished writing reports of 40 students and 30 more students are still remaining.  What a boring work!! >>Correct!Maybe that is the reason I couldn't get up early this morning. >> Maybe that is the reason why I could not get up early this morning.Tomorrow is my favorite day because I have only two classes >>Tomorrow is my favorite day because I only have two classes. >>I only have two classes for tomorrow that is why it is my favorite day.so every Tuesday I go to the cinema!! >>So,I go to the cinema every Tuesday!I wish you also have a good Tuesday. >>I wish you will also have a good Tuesday.See you on a real happy day(it means tomorrow;-) >>Tomorrow will be a real happy day. See you! ;-)

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·