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Today, I want to talk about beauty. A lot of Korean people think beauty is important than ability or experience. Everywhere and every part, beauty is a standard of judge. We know through few example that Korean people think about the beauty how important. In Korea word 'Umchiddal' exactely mean my mother's friend daughter. However the word real intention is perfect woman, can do everything very well and she is beautiful. If she isn't beautiful, she is not 'Umchinddal'. Just she is smart and kind girl. Korea airline is famous of beautiful stewardess. Not easy to be a flight attendant in Korea. It is unfair.

Hi there [이름],             Thank you for sharing your opinion with me. I think that in the world we live beauty matters a lot but I know in the end the most important thing is the beauty we have inside. Keep smiling and be beautiful inside and out. See you tomorrow! -T.Verna-   Today, I want to talk about beauty. >>CorrectA lot of Korean people think beauty is important than ability or experience. >> A lot of Korean people think beauty is more important than ability or experience.Everywhere and every part, beauty is a standard of judge. >> Everywhere and every part, beauty is a standard of judgment.We know through few example that Korean people think about the beauty how important. >> We know through few examples that Korean people think about how important beauty is.In Korea word 'Umchiddal' exactely mean my mother's friend daughter. >> In Korea word 'Umchiddal' exactly mean my mother's friend's daughter.However the word real intention is perfect woman, can do everything very well and she is beautiful. >> However the word real meaning is perfect woman, who can do everything very well and she is beautiful.  If she isn't beautiful, she is not 'Umchinddal'. >>CorrectJust she is smart and kind girl. >> She is just a smart and kind girl.Korea airline is famous of beautiful stewardess. >>Korea airlines famous for beautiful stewardess.Not easy to be a flight attendant in Korea. >> It is not easy to be a flight attendant in Korea.It is unfair. >>Correct