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2018-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Which one is better ? If they tell me “ I think your English is not enough for this job.” Then I would answer like this. I think I love to say second one. What do you think? 1.I’m aware that my English ability is lacking. I will continue to find my weaknesses and work to improve on them. Because of this I’m also very thankful for the fact that I’m not a perfect person as i am able to be more modest/humble and continue to put in effort to improve myself. 2.I’m aware of that my English is not enough. However I’m thankful that I’m not perfect. I Believe the lacking would help me to be good listener and to be humble person. I will promise you that I will do my best to improve my English skill and show my passion at work.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sujin,

Thank you for our classes today!

Have a nice day and a great weekend!

Teacher ELLY.

Which one is better?

If they tell me “ I think your English is not good enough for this job.”

CORRECT!

or>>If they say that my English is not sufficient for the job.

Then I would answer like this.

CORRECT!

or>>Then I would respond to them in this manner.

I think I love to say second one.

>>I think, I would love to say the second one.

What do you think?

CORRECT!

or>>What is your idea?

 1.I’m aware that my English ability is lacking.

CORRECT!

or>>I’m fully aware that my English skill is not that very fluent.

I will continue to find my weaknesses and work to improve on them.

CORRECT!

or>>I will make it a habit to pinpoint my weaknesses and proactively work on improving them.

Because of this I’m also very thankful for the fact that I’m not a perfect person as i am able to be more modest/humble and continue to put in effort to improve myself.

>>Because of this, I’m also very thankful for the fact that I’m not a perfect person as I am able to be more modest or humble and continue to put in an effort to improve myself.

 2.I’m aware of that my English is not enough.

>>I’m aware of the fact that my English is not good enough.

or>>I’m aware of the fact that my English is not sufficient.

or>>I’m fully aware of the fact that my English is less than perfect.

However, I’m thankful that I’m not perfect.

CORRECT!

or>>However, I’m grateful that I’m less than perfect.

I Believe the lacking would help me to be good listener and to be humble person.

>>I believe the lack would help me to be a good listener and to be a humble person.

I will promise you that I will do my best to improve my English skill and show my passion at work.

CORRECT!

or>>I assure you that I will work hard in improving my English skill and I will show you that I’m very passionate about this particular job.

ANSWER: I would choose the second one!




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