Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sujin,
Thank you for our classes today!
Have a nice day and a great weekend!
Teacher ELLY.
Which one is better?
If they tell me “ I think your English is not good enough for this job.”
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or>>If they say that my English is not sufficient for the job.
Then I would answer like this.
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or>>Then I would respond to them in this manner.
I think I love to say second one.
>>I think, I would love to say the second one.
What do you think?
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or>>What is your idea?
1.I’m aware that my English ability is lacking.
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or>>I’m fully aware that my English skill is not that very fluent.
I will continue to find my weaknesses and work to improve on them.
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or>>I will make it a habit to pinpoint my weaknesses and proactively work on improving them.
Because of this I’m also very thankful for the fact that I’m not a perfect person as i am able to be more modest/humble and continue to put in effort to improve myself.
>>Because of this, I’m also very thankful for the fact that I’m not a perfect person as I am able to be more modest or humble and continue to put in an effort to improve myself.
2.I’m aware of that my English is not enough.
>>I’m aware of the fact that my English is not good enough.
or>>I’m aware of the fact that my English is not sufficient.
or>>I’m fully aware of the fact that my English is less than perfect.
However, I’m thankful that I’m not perfect.
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or>>However, I’m grateful that I’m less than perfect.
I Believe the lacking would help me to be good listener and to be humble person.
>>I believe the lack would help me to be a good listener and to be a humble person.
I will promise you that I will do my best to improve my English skill and show my passion at work.
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or>>I assure you that I will work hard in improving my English skill and I will show you that I’m very passionate about this particular job.
ANSWER: I would choose the second one!
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