Hi~!
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강사 첨삭
Hello Sujin,
Thank you!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a great Monday!
Teacher ELLY.
I love to drink coffee every day.
CORRECT!
or>>I enjoy drinking coffee on a daily basis.
especially, Ice Americano is the one of the beverages what I am really into.
>>Especially, Ice Americano is one of the beverages that I am really into.
It is low in calories so I can drink without worry about fat.
>>It is low in calories so I can drink without worrying about fat.
and I also heard that moderate amount of coffee helps us to relax our stress and prevent our heart disease.
>>And, I also heard that a moderate amount of coffee helps us relax from stress and prevent heart diseases.
So, I recommend people to have and enjoy coffee properly and moderately.
>>So, I recommend for people to have and enjoy coffee properly and moderately.
We should eat all things in moderation for good health.
>>We should eat and drink everything in moderation for our health.
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