Hi!
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강사 첨삭
Hello Sujin,
Thank you for today’s composition!
Please keep up the good work!
Have a nice day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
HOMEWORK: when was the happiest time of recent?
>>When was the happiest time you’ve had, recently?
I recently hit the road with my friends to Gapyeong which is one of the popular place doing water leisure sports( water activities).
>>I recently hit the road with my friends to Gapyeong, which is one of the popular places in water sports or water activities.
We were riding several boats such as banana boat and having a barbecue party. Can you imagine?
>>We rode several boats such as the banana boat and we had a barbecue party. Can you imagine?
Getting older, it become more and more difficult to gether together with my friends as we are all busy doing our jobs or following our dreams.
>>As we got older, it become more and more difficult to gather together with my friends, as we are all busy doing our jobs or following our dreams.
So to me, it was really precious time we traveled together and spent time even though we don\'t do special things.
>>So to me, it was really a precious time when we travelled together and spent some time toghether, even though, we didn\'t do any special things.
Also, I think I\'m lucky girl that I have really comfortable friends who can do heart to heart talk.
>>Also, I think I\'m a lucky girl because I have really comfortable friends, whom I can do a heart-to-heart talk with.
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