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Today, I talk about my favorite movie star. I like Jim Carey. When I first saw him, I was elementary school student. I saw [The Mask]. I can't forget that feeling when I was seeing, I felt. The movie was fresh to me, because that movie was first foreign film to me. Since when I first saw him, he was a funny actor to me. I saw almost all of his movie. A few of his movie disappoint me. (can I use "a few of his movie made me disappoint.) However I still like him.

    Hi [이름],       Wow! I like Jim Carey too. Most of his movies are awesome and funny. Let's ta;l about them in the class. -Verna- Today, I talk about my favorite movie star.>>Correct I like Jim Carey. >>CorrectWhen I first saw him, I was an elementary school student. >>CorrectI saw [The Mask]. >>CorrectI can't forget that feeling when I was seeing, I felt.>>I can't forget the feeling I had when I was watching it. The movie was fresh to me, because that movie was first foreign film to me.>>Correct Since when I first saw him, he was a funny actor to me.Since when I first saw him, he was a funny actor. I saw almost all of his movie.>>I saw almost all of his movies. A few of his movie disappoint me. >>A few of his movies disappointed me. (can I use "a few of his movie made me disappoint.) >>(Can I use "a few of his movie made me disappointed?) However, I still like him. >>Correct