Hi!!!!

2018-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Hi Ms. [Name]!! what make you want to work in the aviation field? Working in the aviation field has been my life long dream as I would love keeping other people’s safety and providing excellent memories to my passengers witn my team members. I believe there’s no job like it(cabin crew job). It’s really cool job to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ailen!


I missed you! It\'s been a while. I\'m glad to hear from you. ^^

How are you doing? I hope that you are doing fine.


Thank you for sending me your answer. I wish that you\'ll be able to reach your dreams. I know that you can do it. Just think positively and believe in yourself. ^^


Anyway, have a nice day and a great weekend ahead! Always take care, Ailen! ^^


~Teacher Gina


what make you want to work in the aviation field?

>> What makes you want to work in the aviation field?

 Working in the aviation field has been my life long dream as I would love keeping other people’s safety and providing excellent memories to my passengers witn my team members.
I believe there’s no job like it(cabin crew job).
It’s really cool job to me.

>> Working in the aviation field has been my life long dream as I love keeping other people\'s safety and providing excellent and unforgettable memories to my passengers with my team members. I believe there\'s no better job than being a cabin crew. It\'s really a cool job for me.

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