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hey lina my funny english tutor . everyday . im interested to learn english from you you know ? actually im silent guy .haha and my hobby is reading a book. stroll . but i love sleeping eating .. and you ? ^^ ok you know jisung park who korean famous football player . ? yesterday jisung park got a goal . and won by liverpool . so manchester united ranked 1st . haha ^^ i also like watching to foot ball . im proud of jisung park . thankyou every day night what your teaching me

Young bin,My very funny student.kk Remember to always capitalize "I". I'm very proud of Park Ji sung too,though I'm not a korean but hes's an asian from the continent I'm in as well. It's my pleasure to teach you. Don't be tired to write down here and making our class more interesting.     Here are my corrections.   hey lina my funny english tutor . >>correct sentence. Just capitalize proper nouneveryday . im interested to learn english from you >>Correct sentence. I’m, Englishyou know ? actually im silent guy .haha >>You know I’m actually a silent guy.hahaand my hobby is reading a book. stroll . >>Correct sentence. Just put “and” between book and strollbut i love sleeping eating .. and you ? ^^ ok >>But I love sleeping and eating and you? ok you know jisung park who korean famous football player . ? >>Do you know Jisung Park?Who is a famous football playeryesterday jisung park got a goal . and won by liverpool . >>Yesterday, Jisung Park made a goal and won for Liverpool. so manchester united ranked 1st . >>Correct sentence >>Capitalize proper noun.haha ^^ i also like watching to foot ball . >>I also like watching football >>I like watching football also.im proud of jisung park . >>I’m proud of Park Jisungthankyou every day night what your teaching me >>Thank you every night you teach me. Correction