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I do not have any specific hometown of me.
I cannot feel a sense of belonging to a city or town because I moved so many times in my childhood.
Since 1998, I have lived in Gangnam and practically I feel Gangnam is my town.
Thanks to a singer called Psy, Gangnam station has got very famous and it is quite wonderful a hot spot.
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I do not have any specific hometown of me.
>> For me, I do not have a specific hometown.
I cannot feel a sense of belonging to a city or town because I moved so many times in my childhood.
>> CORRECT
Since 1998, I have lived in Gangnam and practically I feel Gangnam is my town.
>> I have lived in Gangnam since 1998 and I practically feel that Gangnam is my home town.
Thanks to a singer called Psy, Gangnam station has got very famous and it is quite wonderful a hot spot.
>> Thanks to the singer Psy, Gangnam station has became very famous and it is quite a wonderful hot spot these days.
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