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2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. most talked about news 2. vicious cycle 3. almost double 4. tenure 5. job hunt 1. The Samsung Biologics corporate's accounting fraud is the most talked about news these days in Korea. 2. Take care not to fall in vicious cycle. 3. After I moved into this company, my yearly salary got almost doubled. 4. Public officials have a tenure which guarantees they can work until 65. 5. In South Korea, there are very many job hunters who is in their twenties.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

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Cheers!
Jean

1. most talked about news
2. vicious cycle
3. almost double
4. tenure
5. job hunt

1. The Samsung Biologics corporate\'s accounting fraud is the most talked about news these days in Korea.

>> The Samsung Biologic\'s alleged accounting fraud is the most talked about news these days in Korea.

2. Take care not to fall in vicious cycle.

>> We have to avoid falling into a vicious cycle.

3. After I moved into this company, my yearly salary got almost doubled.

>> After I moved in this company, my annual salary got almost doubled.

4. Public officials have a tenure which guarantees they can work until 65.

>> Public employees have a security of tenure which guarantees that they can work until the age of 65.

5. In South Korea, there are very many job hunters who is in their twenties.

>> In South Korea, there is a large number of job hunters who are in their twenties.

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