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Hi,Marie! Did you have a nice weekend? I had a wonderful weekend. My daughters wanted a playground last saturday. So we went to the playground. and I came back home, I went to the hair salon. I wanted change hari-style. but I wasn't satisfied it. Bye.

Hello there! Happy Monday! Thank you for sharing me your story. Thank you for making your composition. I observed that you are improving in writing, and that\'s great news. Just keep on studying English. Take care always. T. Marie Here are my corrections: Hi,Marie! >>CORRECTDid you have a nice weekend? >>CORRECTI had a wonderful weekend. >>CORRECTMy daughters wanted a playground last saturday. >>My daughters wanted to play in a playground last Saturday.So we went to the playground. >>CORRECT.and I came back home, I went to the hair salon. >>And I came back home and I went to the hair salon.I wanted change hari-style. >>I wanted to change my hair style. >>OR. I wanted to have a new hair style.but I wasn\'t satisfied it. >>CORRECT. >>OR. But at the end I wasn\'t satisfied with it. Bye. >>CORRECT.