Hi~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Connie
Last night this web site was down when I wrote something. I'm at work and take a rest because right now lunch time. I forget it I wrote last night.
Anyway I'm gonna take a nep. See you at night
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Oh, I’m sorry for what happened last night; but thank you for leaving a short note though. I hope tonight you can write a longer composition. Take enough rest then, i'll see you tonight.
Stay safe
Connie
Hi ConnieLast night this web site was down when I wrote something.
>> Last night I wasn’t able to send you a message because the website was down when I was about to post what I wrote..
I'm at work and take a rest because right now lunch time.
>> I’m at work taking a rest because it’s lunch time now.
I forget it I wrote last night.
>> I forgot what I wrote last night.Anyway I'm gonna take a nep. See you at night
>> Anyway, I’ll take a nap. See you tonight.
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