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2010-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi Connie Last night this web site was down when I wrote something. I'm at work and take a rest because right now lunch time. I forget it I wrote last night. Anyway I'm gonna take a nep. See you at night

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Hi [이름], Oh, I’m sorry for what happened last night;  but thank you for leaving a short note though. I hope tonight you can write a longer composition. Take enough rest then, i'll see you tonight. Stay safe Connie  Hi ConnieLast night this web site was down when I wrote something. >> Last night I wasn’t able to send you a message because the website was down when I was about to post what I wrote.. I'm at work and take a rest because right now lunch time. >> I’m at work taking a rest because it’s lunch time now. I forget it I wrote last night. >> I forgot what I wrote last night.Anyway I'm gonna take a nep. See you at night >> Anyway, I’ll take a nap. See you tonight.

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