Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Marie!
I feel not good.
So I will go to domitory earler another day.
I will run on a treadmill.
After excersice, I will drink beer, eat chicken with my coworker.
Today, I want to go to domitory early.
Maybe, I'm tired. because I worked during last weekend.
See you tomorrow.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday!
Feeling unwell surely makes our day gloomy especially in this very cold season. You have to be cautious to prevent falling ill. Continue exercising, it can help you fight illness. Stay healthy.
--T. Marie (',)
Please review the following corrections:
Hi, Marie!
>>> CORRECTI feel not good.
>>> I don't feel good.So I will go to domitory earler another day.
>>> So I will go earlier to the dormitory in a different day.
>>> OR So I will go earlier to the dormitory the next day. (It depends on what you mean.) I will run on a treadmill.
>>> I will exercise with the treadmill
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