Hi!

Dear [Name], Teacher long time no see. I’m Aileen who was preparing Cabin crew interview. I was looking forward to take a class with you. I’m still dreaming to be a cabin crew. I stopped to prepare for the interview for a while but I decided I would not give up anymore. Please help me to be better in speaking English. Thank you in advance. Why do you work in Singapore? Singapore is a very special country as I was started my first job there. It’s like my second hometown to me. I have been missing Singapore as I have really good friends there, and I love Singapore’s diversity culture too. If I become Singapore Airlines’s cabin crew, I will be keep coming to Korea for the flight. So I believe my life satisfaction will be high, even though it is for working. I\'d like to work in an environment where I can work long. Thank you so much for your help. If it’s weird, please give me an advice. ^*^ see you in the class

Hello Aileen,

Thank you so much for this letter!

It’s nice to hear from you again after such a long time, I think!

I don’t know why you’re asking if you are being weird!

I think you did just fine in your composition.

Have an awesome weekend and talk to on Monday!

Teacher ELLY.

Dear [Name],

Teacher, long time no see.

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or>>Teacher, it’s been so long since we last talked.

I’m Aileen who was preparing Cabin crew interview.

>>This is [Name]. I was preparing for a Cabin Crew interview before.

I was looking forward to take a class with you.

>>I am looking forward to having a class with you.

I’m still dreaming to be a cabin crew.

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or>>It is still my dream to work as a Cabin Crew.

I stopped to prepare for the interview for a while but I decided I would not give up anymore.

>>I stopped preparing for the interview for a while, but I decided I would not give up.

Please help me to be better in speaking English.

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or>>Please help me become more fluent in speaking the English language.

Thank you in advance.

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or>>Please accept my gratitude in advance.

Why do you work in Singapore?

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or>>What is your reason for working in Singapore.

Singapore is a very special country as I was started my first job there.

>>Singapore is a very special country as I had my first job there.

It’s like my second hometown to me.

>>It’s like a second hometown to me.

or>>It’s like my second hometown.

I have been missing Singapore as I have really good friends there, and I love Singapore’s diversity culture too.

>>I have been missing Singapore as I have really good friends there, and also because I love Singapore’s diverse culture.

If I become Singapore Airlines’s cabin crew, I will be keep coming to Korea for the flight.

>>If I become a cabin crew in Singapore Airlines, I will keep coming back to Korea in most of the flights I will be able to take.

So I believe my life satisfaction will be high, even though it is for working.

>>So, I believe I will have a highly satisfied life, even though it is just with my work.

I\'d like to work in an environment where I can work long.

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or>>It is my desire to have a working environment that will help me stay in the company for a long period of time.

Thank you so much for your help.

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or>>I am full of gratitude for your help.

If it’s weird, please give me an advice.

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or>>If I sound strange, please enlighten me.

^*^ See you in the class.

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or>>Talk to you in our class.