Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,Marie!
Did you have a special event?
I didn't have a special event.
I did work at my office.
After finishing work, I went to my domitory,
I did the laundry.
Coworker came to visit my room.
we eat fruits. I have a good gossip with a coworker.
bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition. Keep up the good work.
T. Marie
Here are my corrections:
Hi,Marie!
>> Hi Marie!
Did you have a special event?
>> Correct
I didn\'t have a special event.
>> I didn\'t have any special event.
I did work at my office.
>> I worked at my office.
After finishing work, I went to my domitory,
>> After finishing my work, I went to my dormitory.
I did the laundry.
>> Correct.
Coworker came to visit my room.
>> My coworker came to visit my room.
we eat fruits. I have a good gossip with a coworker.
>> We ate fruits. I had a nice chat with my coworker.
bye.
>> Bye!
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