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2011-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hi,Marie!! I'm sorry, I delayed our class yesterday and Today. I'm sorry that I couldn't spaek to why delayed our class. Tuesday and yeasterday I drank beer a lot. Tuesday I was off duty, so I went to Deajeon, I cooked specail Menu, So I drank beer with my husband.ㅎㅎ and yeasterday I suddenly promiced with my coworker. Thesesay, I like beer. See you next Tuseday. Bye. Have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Thank you so much for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections below. Take care and have a nice day!

Hi,Marie!!

>> Correct.
I\'m sorry, I delayed our class yesterday and Today.

>> I\'m sorry I postponed our class yesterday and today.
I\'m sorry that I couldn\'t spaek to why delayed our class.

>> I\'m sorry that I couldn\'t tell you why I postponed our class.
Tuesday and yeasterday I drank beer a lot.

>> Yesterday and the day before yesterday, I drank too much beer.
Tuesday I was off duty, so I went to Deajeon,

>> It was my day off last Tuesday, so I went to Daejeon.
I cooked specail Menu, So I drank beer with my husband.

>> I cooked a special dish, so I drank beer with my husband.
and yeasterday I suddenly promiced with my coworker.

>> Yesterday, I suddenly made an appointment with my co-worker.
Thesesay, I like beer.

>> These days, I like beer.
See you next Tuseday.

>> See you on Tuesday.
Bye.

>> Correct.
Have a nice weekend!

>> Correct.

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