hi~
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Hi, teacher
I tried to write my writting here but my writting is over 800 words.
And in this site, we cannot write over 800 words.
My school teacher said we have to write over 1000 words so I had hard time but i cannot write it here because it is too long!
So i will write short writting next time.
When I write it.
I'm sorry.
byebye.
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[이름] it's ok, you don't really have to post everything here, maybe just those parts that you aren't so sure of, okay?
Hi, teacher
>> Hi, teacher.I tried to write my writting here but my writting is over 800 words.
>> I tried to post my compositon bere, bun it is over 800 words.And in this site, we cannot write over 800 words.
>> correctMy school teacher said we have to write over 1000 words so I had hard time but i cannot write it here because it is too long!>> ...so I had a hard time, but I couldn't post it here ...
So i will write short writting next time.
>>Anyway, I will be posting a short one next time.When I write it.
>> OMIT THIS<<
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