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2019-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi guys, I am [Name], 29. I just registered this Power English\'s education program, so I am not good at writing English, even speaking English as well anyways, I work as a network-engineer in Busan for almost two years. I went abroad to study English for six months in Canada so I had a little confidence to talk with foreigner back then. But now, I lose my confidence. That\'s why I start to learn English again and I am not gonna stop it.

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Hi guys, I am [Name], 29.

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I just registered this Power English\'s education program, so I am not good at writing English, even speaking English as well anyways, I work as a network-engineer in Busan for almost two years.

>> I just registered to this Power English program so, I am not that good at writing in English even in speaking English. Anyway, I have been working as a Network engineer in Busan for almost two years now.

I went abroad to study English for six months in Canada so I had a little confidence to talk with foreigner back then.

>> I went to Canada to study English for six months and I had a bit of confidence to talk with foreigners back then.

But now, I lose my confidence. That\'s why I start to learn English again and I am not gonna stop it.

>> But now, I lost my confidence. That\'s why, I\'m going to start learning English again and I am not going to stop.

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