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2020-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Hi I\'m Hyunwoo Lee. This is the first time to have a online class in this way. So I feel a little excited. I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is a English interview on Jan.17 for this course. I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamed of this since I started my job. I majored international trading, as you know, English is a common language all around the world. The entire time I was working, I realized if I\\\'m not good at English, I could\'t survive in my field. That\'s why I quit my job and decided to start studying English since last November. Of course though, I don\\\'t want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English in English, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I restart my job. I\'m going to study until next July, this is not a easy determination, but I made a decision to make my bright future. Anyway, I\'m really looking forward to having class with you. see you soon!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! 

I will be correcting your homework in our next classes using this composition page.  :) 
Best of luck on your upcoming TESOL exam. 
I will help you in the best way I can!
Here are some corrections to this composition. ^^


~t. Ally




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Hi,
I\'m Hyunwoo Lee. 
 
>> CORRECT!

This is the first time to have a online class in this way. 
>> This is my first time to have an online class this way.

So I feel a little excited.
>> CORRECT!
 
I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is a English interview on Jan.17 for this course. 
>>  I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is an English interview on Jan.17 for this course. 

I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamed of this since I started my job.
>> I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamt of this since I started my job.
 
I majored international trading, as you know, English is a common language all around the world. 
>> CORRECT!

The entire time I was working, I realized if I\'m not good at English, I could\'t survive in my field. 
>> The entire time I was working, I realized that if I\'m not good at English, I could\'t survive in my field.   

That\'s why I quit my job and decided to start studying English since last November.
>> CORRECT!

Of course though, I don\'t want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English in English, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I restart my job.
>> Of course though, I don\'t really want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English using the English language, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I begin working again. 

I\'m going to study until next July, this is not a easy determination, but I made a decision to make my bright future.
>> I\'m going to study until next July, this is not an easy decision to make, but I made a choice to make my future bright.

Anyway, I\'m really looking forward to having class with you. See you soon!
>>  CORRECT!

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