HI^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi
I\'m Hyunwoo Lee. This is the first time to have a online class in this way. So I feel a little excited.
I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is a English interview on Jan.17 for this course. I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamed of this since I started my job.
I majored international trading, as you know, English is a common language all around the world. The entire time I was working, I realized if I\\\'m not good at English, I could\'t survive in my field. That\'s why I quit my job and decided to start studying English since last November.
Of course though, I don\\\'t want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English in English, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I restart my job.
I\'m going to study until next July, this is not a easy determination, but I made a decision to make my bright future.
Anyway, I\'m really looking forward to having class with you. see you soon!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Of course though, I don\'t want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English in English, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I restart my job.
I\'m going to study until next July, this is not a easy determination, but I made a decision to make my bright future.
I will be correcting your homework in our next classes using this composition page. :)
Best of luck on your upcoming TESOL exam.
I will help you in the best way I can!
Here are some corrections to this composition. ^^
~t. Ally
---------------------------------
Hi,
I\'m Hyunwoo Lee.
I\'m Hyunwoo Lee.
>> CORRECT!
This is the first time to have a online class in this way.
>> This is my first time to have an online class this way.
So I feel a little excited.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is a English interview on Jan.17 for this course.
>> I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is an English interview on Jan.17 for this course.
>> I\'m planning to enter a TESOL school next March and there is an English interview on Jan.17 for this course.
I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamed of this since I started my job.
>> I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamt of this since I started my job.
>> I\'m not sure whether I can pass it, but I have dreamt of this since I started my job.
I majored international trading, as you know, English is a common language all around the world.
>> CORRECT!
The entire time I was working, I realized if I\'m not good at English, I could\'t survive in my field.
>> The entire time I was working, I realized that if I\'m not good at English, I could\'t survive in my field.
That\'s why I quit my job and decided to start studying English since last November.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
Of course though, I don\'t want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English in English, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I restart my job.
>> Of course though, I don\'t really want to be a teacher, but I\'m sure if I have a high enough level to teach English using the English language, it can be a strong weapon in my field when I begin working again.
I\'m going to study until next July, this is not a easy determination, but I made a decision to make my bright future.
>> I\'m going to study until next July, this is not an easy decision to make, but I made a choice to make my future bright.
Anyway, I\'m really looking forward to having class with you. See you soon!
Anyway, I\'m really looking forward to having class with you. See you soon!
>> CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.