Hi!

2010-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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A successful marriage requires falling in love many times, always with the same person. I like this sentence. I really need to fall in love with my husband everyday. In fact I feel my heart beating when I see him before first son's birth. But after that my heart didn't beat any more. I concentrated on baby. *^^* So I decided to fall in love with him again from today. Thank you for your good advice... Have a nice day~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! I also liked that statement because it’s true… And I can tell by the way you describe your relationship with your husband that you are really in love with each other… Your kids and your marriage are your strength so hold on to it..^^   T. Shy   In fact I feel my heart beating when I see him before first son's birth.>> In fact, I felt my heart beating when I saw him before our first son was born I concentrated on baby. >> I concentrated on our baby.

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