Hi ;)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, my teacher Rina!
This is [Name].
I am studying math very hard even though I cannot go outside.
Today I want to talk about the article \\\'Most Koreans Want to Work After Retirement\\\'.
I will also read the article of my daddy for tomorrow which is about Coronavirus a little because knowing it would be good for me.
See you ! Bye😉\\
+Thank you for making me happy for 25 minutes!
My headache has gone!
강사 첨삭
It was nice seeing you today, Rachel! ^^
I know you feel bored because you are staying at home. I suggest doing things that interest you. Don\'t worry, everything will be better soon!
Good job in class as always, dear.
Keep it up and stay safe!
- T. Rina ^^
1. I am studying math very hard even though I cannot go outside.
>> CORRECT!
2. Today I want to talk about the article \'Most Koreans Want to Work After Retirement\'.
>> CORRECT!
3. I will also read the article of my daddy for tomorrow which is about Coronavirus a little because knowing it would be good for me.
>> CORRECT!
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