Hi abby~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
I`m [이름] i `ll prolong our class to increase my skills with you and also plan to add 5 minutes. So i think I `ll be able to study more longer than last class. As i mentioned earlier, i thank for your thoughful and awesome teaching. i wish we keep going to study english with strong trust each other. Though i can`t fluently express all my mind in english, May be you know how i thank for our friendship. i can`t express our relation with proper word. i think a friend is better than a teacher anyway i am called up the reserve forces so should go for training early morning. see you Thursday. ^d^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I’m really flattered of you! Thank you for being a student and a friend as well. I know that you trust me so much so I greatly appreciate it and I do consider you as one of my closest friends already. Just keep being comfortable speaking and I know that you can adopt the best English skill that you want. Moreover, with regards to your composition, I can see that you’re doing well already yet you always have to be mindful of the correct sentence patterns, spelling of words and correct punctuation marks. Furthermore, you’re doing better. Keep studying and practicing and never give up! Have fun today on the training and take care! See you! =))
ABBY
Hi abby~~~
>> Hi Abby!
I`m [이름] i `ll prolong our class to increase my skills with you and also plan to add 5 minutes.
>> This is [이름], I plan to enroll in a longer time and make it into a 15-minute class to easily polish my English.
So i think I `ll be able to study more longer than last class.
>> So I think I’d be able to study longer with you than our last classes.
As i mentioned earlier, i thank for your thoughful and awesome teaching.
>> As I mentioned before, I thank you for your thoughtful and awesome teaching.
i wish we keep going to study english with strong trust each other.
>> I wish I could study English with you longer and build more trust with each other.
Though i can`t fluently express all my mind in english,
>> Though I can’t fluently express my thoughts in English.
May be you know how i thank for our friendship.
>> Maybe you know how much I treasure and thank you for our friendship.
i can`t express our relation with proper word.
>> I can’t explain in the most proper words how our relationship is.
i think a friend is better than a teacher anyway i am called up the reserve forces so should go for training early morning.
>> I think a friend is better than a teacher. Anyway, I can’t have a class with you cause I was called up for a training at the reserve forces in the early morning.
see you Thursday. ^d^
>> See you on Thursday! ^_^
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