HI abby!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
it's [이름]. i just finished my academy class and i will meet my buddys in downtown area that called "Kangnam station" by many people i always see your reviews and avdices. and also, listen our class repeatly. it is helpful for me to increase englsh speaking and grammers Although i have to study more english routinely, frankly sometimes i feel my upgraded skills when i get in touch with you in the early morning. so i really thanks to your advices and kind smile recently, i think that we are closed each other on th phone. so i am pleased that , i'll try to talk about my private routines and special schedules on the phone again and again. i look forward to mee t you to our class in the next monday morning. now i'll meet my buddys have a nice weekend!!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It's so nice that you found time to write a composition.
I greatly appreciate your openness in everything.
And it's good that you feel comfortable speaking English.
Having confidence like that is really a great tool in mastering your skills.
Don't hesitate whenever you're got some questions to ask.
Moreover, I'm very glad that you became my student.
I feel comfortable talking to you too cause you are very fun to converse with.
Anyway, I really know that with your perseverance and patience,
you will go further in English.
Just have more time and focus with it and I'm so sure that you can improve your skills in no time. I wish you all the best and always enjoy learning!
Have a happy Friday and always take care!
T. Abby ^_^
Here are my corrections for you:
I just finished my academy class and I will meet my buddys in downtown area that called ?Kangnam station?by many people I always see your reviews and advices.
>>I just finished my class from the academy and later, I will be meeting my buddies at Kangnam Station?in downtown.
And also, listen our class repeatedly. >> I always check your comments and suggestions to know my mistakes. I regularly study my corrections and listen to the recording of our classes again and again .
It is helpful for me to increase English speaking and grammers Although I have to study more English routinely, frankly sometimes I feel my upgrade skills when I get in touch with you in the early morning >> It is very helpful for me to increase my English skills particularly on speaking and grammar. So I have to study English more often this time. Frankly speaking, I feel like I have a very good skill when ever I get to talk to you early in the morning.
So I really thanks to your advices and kind smile recently, I think that we are closed each other on the phone.
>> So I'm really thankful of your advices and of your kindness. I really appreciate you being happy all the time and because of that, I feel very close to you when ever we get to talk on the phone.
So I am please that, I'll try to talk about my private routines and special schedules on the phone again and again.
>> I'll try to talk to you about my private routines and special schedules on the phone everyday.
I look forward to meet you to our class in the next Monday morning. >> I'm looking forward meeting you on our next class on Monday.Now I'll meet my buddys have a nice weekend!!>> I have to meet my buddies now, so have a nice weekend!!
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