HI abby!!!

2010-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

it's [이름] I'm sorry that i should postpone our class cause i will take part in the celebraion of scholarship. i didn't know what had been delayed in tomorrow morning at 9 O'clock. i should arrive at this place no later than 9 O'clock So we cannot talk about many things ,tomorrow(Wednesday morning). See you Thursday. abby (I can talk with you in the subway. but you know, the subways are filled with many commuters in the rushhour. so if i talk to you in english there, Many commuters would attend to my voice, like a clown of the circus )

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I really appreciate you informing me of your schedules every now and then. I’m very glad that you really treat me not only as teacher but as a close friend already. I’m very much flattered of that. Anyhow, it’s okay with me. I know that it’s something important. Just always be careful! Enjoy your day ahead! See you tomorrow! ^_^   T. Abby “_)    Here are my corrections for you: I didn’t know what had been delayed in tomorrow morning at 9 o’clock. >>I didn’t know that I will be attending this event so I should have told you earlier that I couldn’t have the class tomorrow morning .  I should arrive in this place no later than 9 O’clock. >>I should arrive at the venue not later than 9 o’clock. So we cannot talk about many things, tomorrow (Wednesday morning). >> So we couldn’t talk about many things again tomorrow. See you Thursday. >> See you on Thursday. I can talk with you in the subway. But you know, the subways are filled with many commuters in the rushhour. >> I can talk with you in the subway but knowing that the place is crowded so our class will just be disturbed cause of the noise. So if I talk to you in English there, Many commuters would attend to my voice, like a clown of the circus >> One more thing, the voice of the commuters in the subway could interrupt our conversation.

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